First Draft And Feedback-FIXATION

Below is our first draft, please note the ending has been cut off.



After watching the first draft of our opening feedback we had many mixed reviews, all of which are documented below.


Below are some key words that people used when asked the question 'Think about the sound and the images are they approprate?Do they go together?'

The group was also asked 'Camera-Are the shots appropriate and relevent? Is there controlled use of the camera,attention to framing, variety of shot distance and angle? Close attention use of mise en scene? Below are some comment we recieved:

-"Good angle of camera shots however could have more variety"

-"Good variety of shots, the long distance shot was done really well"

-Good camera shots, you used a wide variety"

-"The pan shots were a bit shakey and unstable"

-"There was not a large variety of shots"

-"I like the shots walking into the house"

-"Good camera angles, great mise en scene"

-"The foot shot of the group feet before the woman appers is confusing"

- "Party shot is confusing, you could have shown the 'birthday party' on the board to make it more obvious"

- "The shots are good but you could have made it clearer that there was a party by filming the '17th birthday' part of the map"